Could you elaborate some more? What specific scenes will you show? Will you show the present? I'd pick 3-5 scenes that you think will bring about a specific point (demonstrating how it changed/shaped you).
After class on friday and thinking about it over the weekend, I would like to change my topic.
Instead, I would like to discuss my cousin and the illness that she had. More specifically, I will write about the different fundraisers that we had for her and how the support was unimaginable. The purpose for my writing it to show others that a tragic situation can sometimes bring out the best in those around you, and that there is a reason for everything and a light at the end of the tunnel.
Could you elaborate some more? What specific scenes will you show? Will you show the present? I'd pick 3-5 scenes that you think will bring about a specific point (demonstrating how it changed/shaped you).
ReplyDeleteAfter class on friday and thinking about it over the weekend, I would like to change my topic.
ReplyDeleteInstead, I would like to discuss my cousin and the illness that she had. More specifically, I will write about the different fundraisers that we had for her and how the support was unimaginable. The purpose for my writing it to show others that a tragic situation can sometimes bring out the best in those around you, and that there is a reason for everything and a light at the end of the tunnel.
also, my audience will be those faced with an illness in the family who are searching for some kind of hope in the end
ReplyDeleteok, this could work as well too. Be sure you have good scenes picked out and that they come together nicely. Approved.
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